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<h2>Current release <a href=https://landley.net/toybox/news.html>0.8.10</a> (July 30, 2023)</a></h2>
-<p>Toybox combines many common Linux command line utilities together into
-a single <a href=license.html>BSD-licensed</a> executable. It's simple, small, fast, and reasonably
-standards-compliant (<a href=http://opengroup.org/onlinepubs/9699919799>POSIX-2008</a> and <a href=http://refspecs.linuxfoundation.org/LSB_4.1.0>LSB 4.1</a>).</p>
-
-<p>The filename tells toybox which command to run, so
-it's commonly installed with sylinks like "<b>ln -s toybox sed</b>".
-The name "<b>toybox</b>" uses its first argument as the command to run, ala
-"<b>./toybox df -a</b>", and running "<b>toybox</b>" with no arguments lists
-the available commands, currently:</p>
+<p>Toybox is a single executable that can act like many different Linux command
+line utilities, currently implementing:</p>
<blockquote><p>
<!--#include file="commands.html" -->
</p></blockquote>
-<p>You can get --help for most commands (ala <b>sed --help</b>), and ask toybox
-for --help about commands (even ones like <b>true</b> or <b>test</b>
-that don't take a --help argument) with either the "<b>help</b>" command
-or "<b>toybox --help test</b>". Run "<b>toybox --help</b>" to see general help
-about toybox.</p>
+<p>Toybox uses its filename to determine which command to run, so
+it's usually installed with symlinks like "<b>ln -s toybox sed</b>"
+to put all the commands into the search $PATH.
+The name "<b>toybox</b>" uses its first argument as the command to run, ala
+"<b>toybox df -a</b>", so you can use it without installing it. Running
+"<b>toybox</b>" with no arguments lists the available commands.</p>
+
+<p>Each command has built-in <a href=help.html>documentation</a>,
+which you can get in three different ways:</p>
+<ol>
+<li>most commands accept a --help argument (ala <b>sed --help</b>)</li>
+<li>toybox has a "<b>help</b>" command (ala <b>help sed</b> or
+<b>toybox help sed</b>)</li>
+<li><b>toybox --help command</b> lets you and ask toybox
+for --help about commands. Run "<b>toybox --help</b>" with no other arguments
+to see general help about toybox.</li>
+</ol>
<p>You can download a <a href=https://landley.net/bin/toybox/latest>toybox
binary</a> and try it out like so:</p>
@@ -37,8 +42,8 @@
<blockquote><p>
$ mkdir newdir<br />
-$ mv toybox newdir<br />
-$ for i in $(newdir/toybox); do ln -s toybox $i; done<br />
+$ mv toybox newdir/<br />
+$ for i in $(newdir/toybox); do ln -s toybox newdir/$i; done<br />
$ export PATH="$PWD/newdir:$PATH"<br />
ls --help
</p></blockquote>
@@ -53,10 +58,10 @@
$ make tests<br />
</p></blockquote>
-<p>It has "<b>make menuconfig</b>" like the kernel (and clean, distclean,
+<p>Toybox's build has "<b>make menuconfig</b>" like the kernel (and clean, distclean,
allnoconfig, etc), see "<b>make help</b>" for more options.
-The distribited binaries are statically linked against musl-libc to
-provide a portable executable without external userspace dependencies.
+The binaries distributed on the website are statically linked against musl-libc
+to provide a portable executable without external userspace dependencies.
To reproduce that:</p>
<blockquote><p>
@@ -64,7 +69,7 @@
$ cd toybox<br />
$ wget https://landley.net/bin/toolchains/latest/x86_64-linux-musl-cross.tar.xz<br />
$ tar xvf x86_64-linux-musl-cross.tar.xz<br />
-$ LDFLAGS=--static CROSS_COMPILE=CROSS_COMPILE=x86_64-linux-musl-cross/bin/x86_64-linux-musl- make defconfig toybox<br />
+$ LDFLAGS=--static CROSS_COMPILE=x86_64-linux-musl-cross/bin/x86_64-linux-musl- make defconfig toybox<br />
$ ./toybox
</p></blockquote>
